Another Chance

I'm almost ashamed of how bad-cheesy this is, but some people liked it, so I decided I'd post it here. :)

I'm ready for another chance
I want to make you smile
I'm ready to be yours again
Together in the aisle
I know I've made mistakes before,
but not as bad as this
I know I miss your arms around me
I know I need your kiss

My care
stretches far as your
long hair,
when I look into
your stare,
I can see you care too.

I'm ready for another chance
I want to start anew
I'm ready for another chance
I want to be with you
I'm ready for another chance

Author's Note

Please understand it works as song lyrics in my head, so weird syllable counts and repetition shouldn't be overly emphasised in a critique. Thank you. :)

Reviews

[Musicbombshell19]

i think it works the same for most people who write poetry

[KatieDaray]

I dont think its cheesy i like it actually :]