Ai Shi Te Ru

Written in 8th grade.

If I should ever be thankful,

it should be for meeting you.

Beauty that you never saw

deep within starlit eyes.

Beautiful

like the rain

on a misty summer day,

or a deep dark sky.

Your voice rings true in my mind.

Or a chaotic classroom,

speaking exactly what I was thinking.

It was odd,

magical.

You are me

and I am you.

Just with different lives

and different paths.

You knew the unspoken,

yet I wasn’t scared.

For I was blessed

by a presence most never felt.

A different kind of love, I’d say.

Now to take your words to heart;

never contain yourself, you tell me,

and I won’t.

I will live today in your memory,

and although you’re gone,

you never left.

 

 

Ai

 

Shi

 

Te

 

Ru.

Reviews

[J. Hampton]

What awesome imagry and emotional petals
like a flower
loving thoughts
It is well to (always) believe it is...
better to have loved

Excellent !!!

Blesssssssssssssssssss

[My Poetry Is A Part Of ..]

you did a wounderful job on this.
I am so amazed that such a young mind can express the feeligns of love, passion, and emotion the way I can.

Congrats on your medal in my contest that you entered and I look forward to reading more of your work when I get the chance.

Never let anyone tell you that you arent talented. This is a good place to grow in your gift and I know that you will. When you hit it big let me know so I cna buy your book.

Thanks again and Congrats
Michelle

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

WOW this is a beutiful piece of work....very well written...:)

[Christina Harper: Sitti..]

I really enjoyed this. Very floaty and pensieve. The mantra, as Beingjohn said, fit very nicely at the end. Great work.

[Wendy]

oh wow. that was awesome. is it about him, or that other dude, or that other guy (etc)

[Being.john.sweet~The Ev..]

i love the mantra at the endin, nicely done. thank you.