Solitude

Written in the 8th grade.

Shadows of the past,

rejected and secluded

only in your mind.

Reviews

[Cupcaker Baker Maker]

This haiku made me realize something about Haiku: in Japanese tradition, they were generally about "mother" nature and followed an idea-pattern per line (I never remember the specifics), but American Haiku are usually about inner or human nature. Maybe. Often.

Anyway, you really managed to pack a lot of meaning into it. I'm seriously impressed.

[Wendy]

*Applaudes* wow. your haiku is amazing (why can't i write like that??)

[d]

Job well done:-)

[Yira Simone]

Wow...I'm speechless. This was amazing. I really liked how you played on the lonliness this photo portrays. Great imagery and wording. I'm in awe. Since you were first, you will be featured as well as this awesome haiku. Excellent work! I tip my hat off to you.-Catrina