What I Really Do In Algebra Class

What I Really Do In Algebra Class

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in 8th grade.

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Close enough to listen in,
but far enough to stare,
I listen to you talk and joke
with Extacy, the Pervert,
and the One-I-Barely-Know.
You speak with the wise words of
a man who's taken too much coke,
but that's why we love you,
right?

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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That was me only set in the foreground of Chemistry class. This is charming, witty, eccentric. And totally honest. It features the popular characteristics that were (at least) in my class experience. We definitely had one who was in "ecstacy" - or perhaps was just downing it.

I am most absolutely favoriting this because I feel it summed up my whole Public High School experience. It kind of burrowed into my soul, like. Congratulations on winning that contest! I can totally see you deserved it. :)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Lol ~
your work always has a gentle boldness....like an " undercover honesty "
Yeah....although I've been out of scholl for a million years.
It's the characters...fantasises ....and flirting fancy that gets us through....especially a class with a lab.
Clever...piece Breezie.... :)
haven't popped in on you in a while...I'll be back

Blesssssssssssssssssss

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Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice.

-looks at micheal's comment-
ewwwwww.....oh dear god

nothing eventful happens in my math class... only because i'm in the idiot class
they really aren't that bright

the most eventful class is English...
it's the class that what is said in the classroom, stays in the classroom
lots of stories...

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Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Cool.
Our math teacher hits on her students. and she like in her late 60's (shudder...)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that's how it is in one's adolescence, I thought my homeroom teacher was cool because he drank with coffee, and not only that but he defended me once, while eating cookies in classroom, when we weren't suppose to. :)
--great read,
---MIshel

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Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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