Sevenling II (She sits by the pool...)

Sevenling II (She sits by the pool...)

A Poem by Breezie Kae

She sits by the pool 
eating buttered puffcorn,
gossiping, keeping secrets.

Did you hear what Sarah said?
I can't believe she would.
Where were you last month?

Nowhere, she said, because she really was.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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Good write. I think that everyone likes sitting near a pool. I wish I had one. I would be diving in everyday. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'd love to have a day by the pool sitting chatting and eating popcorn, just generally being lazy! Again nice choice of words, but these lines always leave me wanting more, even though here, there is "nothing!" :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


With the new world. Easy to wander off with phones and gossip the complete day. Popcorn, swimming and time. I need some of that. A interesting poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 26, 2010
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