Clueless

A series of Tankas.

I must let you know,

I’m really bad at this, but

I really like you.

My innocence is clear,

but I swear you won’t break me.

 

I must let you know

that my words are stuck again.

You could predict that -

please excuse my cluelessness;

I have been keeping this in

 

I must let you know,

I admire from afar.

Please don’t think me weird,

it’s just I don’t know how to

let these words off of my chest.

Reviews

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

Verry sweet
i like it :)
well done

[Hollywood]

It's a very cute poem. I love the image of this pretty girl that is socially akward towards the one she likes. I loved it. It's very well written.

[Alz Alz]

1) I'd love to read your tanka poem! :)
2) don't worry, i won't delete your comment for advertising on my poem ^_^
3) i'm glad you enjoyed my Tanka explanation!!!!!!! I'm so happy! You're the first!
4) My review of your poem: Great form! Good tanka ^_^ I've never read a tanka about something like this! I can happily say you're my first lol :D My favorite lines are: "Please don’t think me weird, it’s just I don’t know how to / let these words off of my chest." ^_^ 100/100 from me! Good first(?) tanka!!