WELL I WANT TO SEIZE TOMORROW AND BE WITH YOU AND ALL OF THE OTHER WRITERS AND POETS AT: thepoeticminds.ning.com (poetry, literature and dreams) BECAUSE YOU ARE A CREATIVE ANOMALY AND IT'S OBVIOUS THAT WORDS DELIGHT IN YOUR COMPANY.
YOU RECEIVE LOTS AND LOTS OF REVIEWS AND COMMENT FROM THE OPEN MINDED PEOPLE THERE.......
First of all, thank you for sending the read request. Secondly, this poem has intrigued me since you do use a foreign language which can be a risky move. But I do like the general message in this poem. With all honesty, I would work on rhyming and rhythm as these are two natural elements in a poem that creates flow. Flow helps the reader get through and convict the message you want to convict. After having wrote 300 poems, I'm only now becoming a 'natural' at this, so it can take practice. Coming back to the message, I like the thought of seizing the day. But you must also live wisely. Remember, a poem is a combination of heart and mind... or heart and soul. It cannot just be emotionally wrote. It cannot be wrote simply by taking a writing class in college. Poetry is a unique sense of art that combines your heart with your mind. Again, thank you for the reading request. 9/10