Moment Past Never (With You)

Moment Past Never (With You)

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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10/2/09

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In my dream last night, I held your hand

so tight, and we just laid there,

but I can’t see my lying next to you.

 

I imagined that you looked at me

and felt what I was thinking,

but I can’t see you thinking much of me.

 

Well I spent too long

thinking how I need some balls,

you know it’s true.

 

Well I wrote a song,

but I never spoke a word,

I only thought I’d see myself with you.

 

I had a dream,

but it doesn’t really matter.

I let another moment pass me by.

 

The things in my head, that I’m

not saying, well they’re still here,

I just thought I’d let you know.

 

So I backed off, rightly,

because I know that I’m too late,

it’s all I can do.

 

Oh, I thought I learned,

guess I’m learning again,

I only thought I’d see myself with you.

 

Ooo, oo-oo-oo-oo,

I just thought I’d see myself with you, oo-oo-oo

Ooo, oo-oo-oo-oo

Don’t want to stop hoping you do too, oo-oo-oo

Now, and I can’t speak,

not that I ever could,

I just thought I would,

I just thought I would.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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I love love love this. The second stanza is my favorite. You have an excellent sense of rhythm.

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