Sunset In Our Eyes

Sunset In Our Eyes

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written during freshman year.

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Funny how we have

the same problem yet we

don't think to fix it.

 

Don't ask the question

for what the answer is, not

daring to go there.

 

I know the answer,

the answer is you and me

getting through all this

 

together, the best

it ever could be, and the

sunset in our eyes.

© 2009 Breezie Kae


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I like this. Nicely written. For me the closing line just brings it all together.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simple truth. All we need is love and understanding of one another. Your words ring a truth that so many miss. No matter the problem as long as you are able to count on each other you can make through any thing. Great Message here.





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Added on February 8, 2008
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