CapturedA Chapter by Duaa
Okay this chapter is small..bit I hope u people like it n please do review it so I would know where I'm doing wrong and what do I need to improve moreover tell me if u like it cuz well I'll like ti get appreciated who doesn't ;) now to the story:
I opened my eyes slightly,the bright light blinding me.. Pain shot through my head..I Closed my eyes tight again..slipping into unconsciousness.. ********** I was running.. Something was after me, something dangerous..suddenly I felt a pull from behind like it was trying to suck me in..I ran for my life "No! No! "I cried. I pushed harder...next moment I was falling.. Just falling into darkness with no end... My eyes shot open.. I was soaked in my own sweat. My breathing heavy and ragged, my heart beating so hard that I feared it will burst. "Stay calm!" I told myself "it was just a dream a bad bad dream".I cleaned my sweat with the back of my hand. As my eyes adjusted to darkness I saw that I was alone in a small dingy room. It was Bare except a tattered mattress on which I was sitting ,high above the wall was a small window...on the far left corner was a blue door, locked ,no doubt. I looked around and saw a bottle of water in the corner. I tried to get up but fell over. My hands were tied at the back ,passing them under my body I got them at front ,pulling at the rope with my teeth. After freeing my hands I got up using wall as support .I limped towards the bottle ,cringing with pain at my every move. Water ran down my parched throat, relieving the soreness a little. I slumped down on floor.. burying my head in my knees "What Is going on?" I was confused ,confused and scared... yes! I was scared to death. "Why me ?what have I done". I thought desperately "and mom! where's she? why isn't she here ?oh mom!" tears started streaming out of my eyes. I was crying... Because I was overwhelmed by the fear of unknown scary possibilities... I was dreading the moments that yet had to come... Because I felt helpless and vulnerable.... And due to the unbearable pain in every joint of my body. "Oh God! please help! please be it a dream..a-a mistake". I hugged myself tighter. I don't know when sandyman did his magic on me and I fell asleep. ************* I woke up by the sound of clicking outside. The door was opening. I scurried against the wall my eyes wide. The door opened and I felt the breadth caught up in my throat..like I'd pass out. © 2014 Duaa |
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Added on July 16, 2014 Last Updated on July 16, 2014 AuthorDuaafaisalabad, PakistanAboutwell im a 16 year old girl craxy about reading novels writing stories..painting...n all da creative stuff.. more..Writing
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