Life in da Ghetto

I wrote this last year for mii class..itz only 100 wordz n it iz all a story..it waz 2 hard lol..but tell me wht u think plzzz

Nightmares; peaceful Dreams being interrupted by gun shots, mamas crying that her son is laying on the hot concrete blood, oozing from his chest. Screaming why god why. Ambulance police coming to save that young man but hurry before he takes his last breath. Just another young man close to death can’t cry over it no more, wake up the next morning like nothing happened, got to go hustle to make that money even though you don’t want to, it’s the only way to stay on top. Rottlweilers guarding the junk yards. Just another day of life in the ghetto.

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[Cheef Rockah]

wow dat jaunt is jus deep fo real....i heard dat s**t all thru coateville nd evn heard stories s**t coatesville still bad but yee ne ways it was rlly good boo boo keep it up. :D