STRIPPED OF FLESH

Stripped of flesh, you gorge yourself

On dissonance and yesterday’s news

Sliced and diced, circumvented

You blister with disease

 

Eyes wired shut and heart dissected

Empty spaces of in-between

Gorged delicacy of discontent

With nothing to appease

 

Wide eyed with fear you stand immobile

A victim of a fate unseen

Incarcerated by your senses

You can no longer bleed

Reviews

[MockingJuliet]

Your choice of words were excellant. I really enjoyed reading it.


Wide eyed with fear you stand immobile
A victim of a fate unseen
Incarcerated by your senses
You can no longer bleed

My favorite lines.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very descriptive, a victim of fate unseen I like it, Shelly

[Legion]

Getting down to the nothingness within. I like it. Your choice of words carry deeply. Good write.