SONG OF MY SOUL

Song of my soul

You shiver in a moment of time

Cold

Lost in the torments of the mundane

I search for you

 

But all is silence

 

A vast stretch of desolation

Beyond the tears

Where do you hide sweet minstrel?

You play for me no more

 

The roar of silence

 

Dreams repressed

I know myself no more

Dead

You have taken the essence of me

And locked it away

 

In silence

Reviews

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

eloquent, dark and passionate - I love it

[Pakino]

I like the idea of how you are trying to find something inside of you. And that you are empty without it. Nice!

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Fantabulous, great choice of words, great poem, Shelly