How many times ...

How many times ...

A Poem by Sawbones
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Love

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How many times will I tell you that I love you
... That my love for you is pure and true.
How many times will I tell you that I care
...That my love for you is rare
How many times will I tell you that you are special to me
...That my love for you makes me write with glee.
How many times will I tell you the emotions I feel inside
...That the feelings make act with pride .
How many times will I tell you that I can't live alone
...That no one can fill my heart ... Your home .
How many times will i tell you that my love for you is too deep
...That even the thought of you alone makes me unable to sleep.
How many times will I tell you that my love for you is forever
... That the ties between us will never sever .
How many times will I tell you that I love you from the belly of my heart
... That the sentence "I love you " is more than a fact .

© 2017 Sawbones


Author's Note

Sawbones
Pls , I need constructive criticisms .

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The repetition adds a sense of longing and sadness.

A very raw and heartfelt piece!

Wonderful work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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A Poem by Sawbones