Dreams Just Dream, Life Just Suffers

The 2000's need a Revolution. We need something fresh to wake this generation up! We need something unique but with the spirit of '68, '77 and '86. In culture, music, politics & everything.

 Go outside. Find yourself inside,

escape and discover yourself captive.

Wake up, wake up, your still asleep.

Don't die. Don't die, 

keep the spirit of '68, '77 and '86 alive.

Brave kids don't run, brave kids live

but to live you have too doubt.

I dreamt, I dream answers. 

Some people dream of winning money; 

of sex with whatever celebrity, 

or of being a rock star or something.

 I dream of revolution.

It's just something real,

like a dream of a thousand years in the future.

 

Sadly dreams don't explain anything, 

sadly dreams don't change anything.

Tragically life is full of unexpressed feelings,

 tragically dreams are just dreams, that just break your heart.

 

Author's Note

♥We learn the hardest way♥Revolution♥Just a new poem♥Life♥Dreams♥Suffering♥Dream♥Revolution♥
Words are words but the word is R♥E♥V♥O♥L♥U♥T♥I♥O♥N♥

Reviews

[Erin]

This poem is really inspirational, which is what makes it good. It truly is time for a revolution. The first stanza was especially good -- just the rhythm throughout that stanza and the word choice helped with it. You didn't really use fancy vocab, but just the way you said things made it great. I really like this poem -- going in my library. Nice job.
PBP

[Adelia Alighieri]

The last stanza was absolutely wonderful. Well done, I loved it!

[Desert Dreamer]

I dream of revolution as well. If we all speak out we shall start the revolution.

[Ruth]

We certainly do love! We need to stand up, out of the shadows, fight back with peace and knowledge of what oppresses us!
Great work, love it!
Inspiring!
xx

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sometimes all it takes is one powerful voice screaming beautifully and passionately and with sincerety through a poem to begin a revolution~ very strong writing!~excellent!~

[Andrew Wright]

And live we shall, as writers revolution is always buzzing beneath our twitching fingertips, ready to spread. I love the way this reads, it's certainly going in my favorites.

[LiLySoSo]

This was lovely with an unexpected, realistic ending.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Trust me once I dream, it will be for a week...
Very good, there are something seems to be lost in this one, wonder what was it...
never mind, I'm not gonna be a meanie,

[Closedown]

Brave kids don't run, brave kids live

Yes. It is time to start something.

[Kes]

Very very nice.

Don't wish
Don't start
Wishing only
Wounds the heart...

Anyway, great poem. And i'm up for a revolution if you are! lol I can't stand apathy. I can't stand people not caring about anything.
Gerat write.