Dreams Can Sometimes Be For Real Too

Think James Dean & Natalie Wood and just think, if the universe had really ended. Then they would never have even spent a single day together.

Away from everything...

Is where I can be, really be me.

Because I've always got 

(my) dreams to live for.

Away from you...

Is where my dreams reside,

Even though I'm far from you. Inside,

I'm never really alone, beside (the) you (in me).

To see away all your sadness,

The truth of the truth is...

I just want things to be more real, 

Which makes the truth hard to live with.

Never really away from the past

(or the future) sooner or later... 

One day will have to become 

More than just a dream.

Reviews

[A.Lee]

I love the last stanza. Very nicely written.

[Poetry Girl]

this is really great and i liked the way you write it, putting things in perenthesis (not sure if i spelled that right). great work.

[Mary E. Green]

I like this a lot! There really is nothing bad about this. Loved it

[Ruth]

Gotta keep dreaming and living!
A great poem love, excellent use of wording!
Awesome
xx

[Erin]

Your use of parentheses is astounding. Ooo nice word choice.....in your poem too. That is also astounding.
It was short but it had a slow enough movement/flow that it seemed much longer. Good job.....no, wait, Astounding job.
PBP

[Adelia Alighieri]

Excellent.

[Chipgirl]

nice write. well done.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I like your unique perspective ~ well composed poetic~

[Jonathan De Elvira]

live....?
hurm...
good one...

[Jane Doe]

OMG! SOOOOOOO TRUE I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
okay sorry game face critic times :)
I like it It portrays much emotinal character I enjoy this poem to the fullest
100% for you luv it!
-ajm
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