We don't know why we're here, or why we put up with it, or why when things end other things begin. Do your best and don't worry. If it's not good enough. Then move on it's not the end of the world.
We're all ghosts,
We're the oppressed and the corrupt,
Tip-toeing in and out of what's real and what's fantasy.
What's there to believe in?
What was true as been and gone,
Truth and love are temporary, do your best and don't worry.
We've drained imagination, no-one cares who's real or fake.
We've worn the purity out of truth, everyone's unkind.
There is a better fate, there must be but I'm not worth it.
Grim sky hides uncertain stars from the myth in your heart.
Oblivion is all that's between us, we pay for our dreams.
From the heart of the heart of pain, it's just another end to the world.
"We've drained imagination, no-one cares who's real or fake.
We've worn the purity out of truth, everyone's unkind.
There is a better fate, there must be but I'm not worth it."
gorgeous heartfelt piece of poetry! this is the first i have read of your work and i really enjoyed this. so many truths buried in questions and the mind wanderings on an artist. its really lovely!
"We've drained imagination, no-one cares who's real or fake.
We've worn the purity out of truth, everyone's unkind.
There is a better fate, there must be but I'm not worth it."
Good job, it's a great poem. Your stanzas develop into longer ones as we learn more about the speaker, good use of physical imagry. Your vocabulary is the third best thing about this poem. Fantastic.
PBP
Excellent!
I am hit hard by this, so many reflections of life and the senselessness to it!
Awesome work love!
All will become clear and yet there is that fear of what is beyond, or the realisation that the heart is a ghost before that time comes, whats worse? lol
Stunning work!
xx
This poem was truly amazing, I adored it. Everything you spoke of in this poem was very true. The way you wrote it was very interesting, specially the words you've chosen. I found it very creative. It help the poem be even more fantastic. Truly amazing work. Also what you wrote up above..was so very true and absolutely insightful.
I'm Russell from Wales.
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