Unrequited

Unrequited

A Poem by Drow
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For those of you stuck on the wrong side of something one-sided

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Do you love him;
Whispered promises,
False actions.

Do you love him;
Stolen kisses,
Secret caresses.

Do you love him;
Cheated feelings,
Heartache.

Do you love him;
Tears in the darkness,
Forced smiles.

Do you love him;
Congratulations,
Friendly jibes.

Do you love him;
Loss of self,
Hardship.

Do you love him;
Self told fibs,
Shattered illusions.

Do you love him;
Trapped inside,
Broken visions.

Do you love him;
No, I never can,
And never will.

© 2008 Drow


Author's Note

Drow
Something that happened to me & I hope no one will have to go through

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A bit too late for that. You're not the only one there...

Anyway, it's really an unusual writing I've ever read in a while. It's like a song line being repeated until you finally get the answer. So, it's all still good tho...


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, I am intrigued with these piece. I am curious as to what happened to you... but either way it was good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a rather common problem these days, but you have given a very different expression to it. Usual yet unusual. Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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