Take me to Neverland.

Take me away from here.
This God awful place.
I don't want to grow old
And lose all sense of inner child.

Take me to a land
Where I can read to the lost boys,
And fight pirates all day.
To fly with Tinkerbell
For this be the land
That I do seek.

Take me to Neverland.
Where we can be young together.
I can be your Wendy,
If you'll be my Peter Pan.

Reviews

[Yaseen J Malik]

the immortalized dream of one that understands the wonder and beautiful simplicity of youth. verry nice

[Simon Welsh]

If you remain young forever, your life will be ruled by the fear of growing old. Nice.

[Mogan Horse]

Mixture of a child's thoughts with an adult's perspective. Very interesting!

[Audrey Bowers]

great poem! I like the referencing to Peter Pan. good job! :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Sweetest simplicity to wash away the dark stains of pain that seem to blind us as we grow older. May we all find the second star on the right, and go straight on till morning. xo

[marty360]

A sweet poem mixed with a child like innocence :)
Love it :)

~ M

[Scott Metro]

Sweet sentiment ..if only...if only...if only.
Hang on to your dream...why not?

Enjoyed the read.
Scott

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes take me to never never land too.We all wish things were easier like when we were younger.We did'nt have so many responsibilities and we could play with peter pan and tink,plus you can be young forever with the love of your life .Nice one Mak:)