Dance until you die.

Feel the beat
Pumping through my vains.
Rumbling through my bones.
Making my body dance in time.

Sweat dripping down my face,
Fatigue growing faster
My muscles slowly aching,
but I can't stop.
It feels too good.

Drop the bass
And make me scream
Make this dance last
For eternity.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like this write alot...Thank you for sharing...:)........................

[Simon Welsh]

Lovely piece!
By the way, *veins ;)

[Mak(ayla:)]

I thought I had it spelled wrong. Thanks(:

-Mak(:

[Cody Williams]

A very well done piece Mak! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[annabellee]

this made me smile. haven't been dancing for too long. i really should go soon.
anyways great write :)

[marty360]

Love it. I don't know if there was meant to be a somber meaning behind this piece but it reads that way. Very well done, Mak.

~ M