My Karma Is Insomnia.

This lack of sleep, soon comes back and haunts me.
Just like karma, but it's name is insomnia.
Insomnia is way worse than karma.
I cannot sleep and escape away to my dreamland.
Instead I lie awake and stress over every single thought in my head.
It goes back and forth to the worst thoughts.
Why are they still there?
Why do they only haunt my thoughts,
Day after day?
Ugh, will I ever drift away into my wonderful dreamland?

Reviews

[Jesse Lancaster]

I like it, though it's a tad repetitive. I like that you describe insomnia as this sort of fiend that haunts you in the night and blocks the entrance to your sanctuary-like dreamland. Try to elaborate on things of that nature. Great job! :D