Lost

short

"Lost"

I don't know what to do

Everything I've done

It's all been for you

I'm no longer having fun

I'm lost in this world alone

Cursed to walk the shadow lands

Until my name is written in stone…

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

A great and to the point poem. I really don't see anything wrong with it. You managed to help capture the essence of being lost with just very few words. You have shown that even someone even new to writing poems can manage to capture the emotions conveyed in this poem.

[Penny Dreadful]

short but beautiful

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Short but even the shortest poems can be great and a this is one of those great poems.

[Jim Parson]

Very powerful...very emotional. Says so much with few words. Well done!