PayBack

i don't know why i wrote this, but i wrote it the day before i had surgury

“Unpleasant Payback”

In a place where cries go unheard,

It doesn’t matter no one can hear a word.

You fall to the ground,

Hoping to be found.

But your all alone,

With a broken bone.

Now you wonder why?

Because you know your going to die.

Why do you deserve this?

Well, think of it as a pleasant bliss.

This should be worse,

It’s like a curse.

Feeding on your soul,

And it has reached it’s goal.

You beg for a cure,

So you can be pure.

But the darkness inside,

Has stolen your pride.

It’s screaming your name,

And you finally feel the shame.

You know it was wrong,

She was so strong.

But you took her away,

And now you must pay.

You begin to scream and cry,

You don’t want to die.

But it all goes unheard,

Every single f*****g word.

And now it’s time,

For you to pay for your crime.

As you lay on this dark cold ground,

Your heart starts to pound.

Out from the darkness the monster appears,

Grinning in pleasure from the sense of your fears.

You scream in pain,

As your life is drained.

You now know how it feels to have your life taken away,

In such a way.

It feels so surreal,

But it’s completely real.

And now you’ve hit rock bottom ,

And your body decades and turns rotten…

Reviews

[augustmoon80]

Scary! :)

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

i love it, my type of writing. I enjoyed reading it, it kept me on the edge just wanting to see what was about to happen. Great work, kitty.