Three Wishes

"Three Wishes"

If ever the day came,

who would you blame?

feeling all of your emotions together

knowing you wouldn't last forever

you have three wishes now, as you just think

all your emotions making you sink

you wonder what others would do?

riches & fame prolly, but you don't want to be like them too

finally you know what to wish for

and you don't want anything more

closing your eyes

holding in your silent cries

you wish them everything and eternal love

letting a single tear drop fall while starring at the stars above

thinking of everything like making a list

you make your second wish

you wish them no sorrow or tears for life

as you slowly pick up a knife

and for your final wish

you take a long deep breathe in

exhaling slowly, you know this is prolly a sin

now you whisper "i wish for this knife ...to end..... my life..."

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

man this piece brought chills to me, i have never read a piece this emotional and deep yet at the same time so chilling to the bone. I'm hard to frighten so to say this made me scared you are a great poet.