Faith

Faith

A Poem by Drone17
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A leap of faith.

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Standing on the ledge.

Fear pumping through his veins.

His mind losing its edge.

With no one to blame.

When hate had run dry.

Leaving only his lies.

And with his last breath.

He took his leap of faith.

© 2015 Drone17


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This is crazy, this allows everyone to make their own mental imagination of what is actually happening or what actually happened to a person who feels this way. Anybody can feel worn out about something that has been bothering them. You feel as you are going insane and there isn't any other way out. Please write more! I'm excited to see with what you come up with next. Feel free to send me a read request with you new work id love to review it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Drone17

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you appreciate the vagueness of the situation, I wanted the reader to project th.. read more
Neythan Cardoso

9 Years Ago

You're welcome I'm always here to help



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Fox hole Christians is a term and you may be writing of the same. Fear does act as a conversion tool in the religious world. When alone and facing our fear, we find often there is only one place to turn. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Drone17

9 Years Ago

Honestly, I've never heard of the term until you mentioned it but looking into it...its actually rea.. read more
Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

Your not hearing is not surprising. Fox holes are not what they were in WWI and WWII. Take care.
Drone17

9 Years Ago

True, take care as well!
A nice powerful piece. You have successfully stripped the narrative back to basics and tis gives it a nice raw feel.

Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Drone17

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I prefer writing longer and more detailed poems but I wanted to writing something simpler.. read more
This is crazy, this allows everyone to make their own mental imagination of what is actually happening or what actually happened to a person who feels this way. Anybody can feel worn out about something that has been bothering them. You feel as you are going insane and there isn't any other way out. Please write more! I'm excited to see with what you come up with next. Feel free to send me a read request with you new work id love to review it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Drone17

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you appreciate the vagueness of the situation, I wanted the reader to project th.. read more
Neythan Cardoso

9 Years Ago

You're welcome I'm always here to help

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Added on November 4, 2015
Last Updated on November 4, 2015
Tags: Poem, Dark, Death, Faith

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Drone17
Drone17

El Paso, TX



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I've always wanted to be a writer, but despite having all these ideas crammed in my head, I've found it difficult to truly write a story. Instead, to ease my frustration I write small and dark poems t.. more..

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