Emotional Control

This is a different kind of writing for me, and it kinda drove me crazy... I hope you all like it... Because this is very very important

Rising through all our emotions

Letting it out and not keeping

Bottled up, leading to an outburst

Oh! What a wrong way to go about it

Even women love a calm man

Who can control his emotions

Who can keep the upsurge at bay

Who knows how to react at a given time

Emotions can get the better of us

That we all know extremely well

Even then they do get the better of us

And just ruin everything for us

But in the end what can we do

We are men, who usually don't

Know impulse control very well

And just screw up

So ladies please cut some slack

And just be a bit more patient with us

And don't overreact at every point

And create a mess of it all

No offense to anyone here

Just trying to make a point

Which is a fact of the matter

Hopefully will work for the better

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Very good, wonderfully written! It seems more like a very intelligent person giving VERY intelligent advice than a poem. But that small matter is very minute when it comes to the base of this fantastic write. I am female (in case you didn't know) and now (after reading your poem) I'll take this advice into my future relationships, and hopefully I'll be successful.

[Priyanka Natesh]

:D Haha! I totally loved this piece! Yea. we should cut some slack, shouldn't we? Drove home the point, you have :) Great write!

[An owl on the moon]

You drive home a powerful point... of emotions... of mercy... of sharing the world with others and our unique differences. May understanding bring peace.

[Dev...]

Very well written , feelings what a male personality seldom conveys...
good work...