Now Its Time To Move On

Moving on was a monumental task

Which is very hard for a person

But when he attempts to move on

He still goes back in time

Reminiscing in the ruins

He goes to ask a girl out

And she ends up telling him

"You are still not over your ex"

Which makes him think

Is that really true

He searches for the part in his head

Which still cares for her

Cries for her, is concerned for her

Curses it for still existing

And blame it for everything

Oh! He is trying so hard

To get away from the beautiful past

All the moments he spent with her

It made him smile a lot

But now, its only hurting him

But then tears played its magic

Ending something very tragic

Its finally time to move on

And the time to get strong

And the time to be truly happy again

Reviews

[Priyanka Natesh]

Very moving, Dushyant :') You should try to get her to read it sometime...subtly of course. It's a poem personifying the grief every person in a breakup goes through...and ends with positive thoughts. Move on. Leave the past behind. Start afresh. Lovely poem Dushyant. :)

[nostal]

Very underrated write.

[An owl on the moon]

What an aching walk.. that moment to consider the time to move on.. and to think now that letting go will actually bring you happiness... You write with a perfect honesty and pure heart.

[Tkess]

To get to the point were you are ready to move on is usually easier said than done. It reads almost like a monologue on stage.