Where am I now

Checking, wondering, trying to find myself

Am I really where I want to be

Hunting, looking and thinking

Am I actually there now

Or am I actually lost

These pictures all around me

Of successful people here and there

Just stare at me and ask me a big question

Where are you now?

But they never receive an answer

The truth is that in my short life

I don't know what I have achieved

I am still lost in world's little bubble

Where I simply just laugh and cry

Or just dance in the worldly tunes

Reviews

[Tkess]

Regardless of where you are in live it is never where you think you would be. When you try to judge your self against other people you are always going to be disappointed. Stay in your little bubble as long as you can and you will be a happy man. Nice write.

[An owl on the moon]

As painful as your words read, these are questions fewer people are asking... so many just wandering day after day without a notion of the treasure that's slipping away... Profoundly blazing, my friend.

[Jvl narasimharao]

A great introspective poem.Everbody should ask himself/herself these questions.
yours JVL

[sarah]

Many good questions question including me I have asked these questions there is always a plan God always knows what you were placed on this earth to achieve. And you will achieve it well whatever that may be! Poetry I believe haha great work!

[DearSweetAgony]

This is a cool little write.
I enjoyed read, flawless job!