Butterflies in My Tummy

Butterflies in my tummy

When I keep thinking of you

Just lost in sheer nervousness

And reached a point of sheer weakness

I don't know what I can call this

Love or a sheer happenstance

Or a simple crush getting me tongue tied

Oh No! That can't be right

But in the end I do know one thing

When I see your face or hear your name

It comes as a sweet symphony to me

And makes me feel really very happy

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

I could relate so well to that feeling.. that wonder... the longing to be with someone that overwhelms the heart and mind... and the stomach too with the wildness of butterflies! I still get that feeling with someone precious in my life. Beautiful and tender write!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Pure and simple, that's how it is...I think you captured the feeling wonderfully.

[Daniel88Batson]

That was real lovely. Reminds me of my first crush. And happenstance... lovely word!!

[OT]

very sweet piece - the butterflies - cute tale - nice job!

[AAHELI]

ooh some one has a crush!!! i like it, very cute! :)

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh that is so cute! I love it! Who is this written for by the way?

[Tkess]

Although it is such a cliche, sometimes things are cliches because they are true. Live is too short to love and not know how the other person feels. You have captured that moment of attraction.

[MuSe Ampoule]

This is a very sweet piece Dushyant! It's so nice to feel that stirring of the soul when there's a new love interest.