The Poem of a Push-over

Alone, Aloof, Away, Invisible

Thrown away, Neglected

College has always such a world for me

Where I've at some point ended up feeling alone

Used and then Thrown

And then even after that Wronged

Pushed over with everything

I don't know if I can call that bullying

Tired of living this life of a pushover

Who is sweet and kind and does not judge

Just being used and end up being hurt

Who cries alone and no one knows

In the end, this is my life

The life I live all the time

I wish I could use better words

To show how much I've been fucked

But then I just got one message for the haters

One for the show-offs, who cry for help

F**k you and all, and rot all alone

Criticize me but don't use and throw

Reviews

[Priyanka Natesh]

Way to go Dushyant!Amazing feel!I know perfectly well what you are talking about.I don't know if it is just the Indians who are so miffed by insecurity and double minds that they swarm around wannabe's and turn into wily foxes..There are VERY few people you can trust and until you find them it's a lonely,scary world.You speak the minds of many people.Thank you.It shook me! :)

[sarah]

So much anger but I feel this I have felt this way before being the person that simply is there to help the broken but in the end you don't get any thanks you just get stepped on great great write! :-)

[DearSweetAgony]

This is wonderful, and very true.
This poem is like a middle finger to the moochers.
Great Write!
Flawless Job!

[An owl on the moon]

This just overwhelmed me.. I've known the pain.. had other friends who wondered the same as well... To try and and be kind and giving n a world so full of selfishness.. No.. it isn't easy.. not at all... It takes all the courage and strength one can find. Powerful, Dushyant.

[Tkess]

I am reminded of one of my favorite Bukowski Poems, "the genius in the crowd." Use the bad experience to fuel your poetry and rise above the bullshit.

[Helpless]

very interesting and there was obviously a lot of deep thought put into this