A Longing To Find Peace

This is my feeling after watching so many movies, or listening to such amazing music, or winning some competition, but I don't know why I do all that. I just need to find that peace.

I always feel lost in certain points of life

After watching or listening to certain things

I ask myself whether I have found my passion

But the answer doesn't come from within

I don't know if I have found my peace

To see everything very clearly

I don't know if I have found myself

Cause I feel lost so many times

I just have so many questions

Never an answer

Just an everlasting hope to find them

And to find my peace

Till then I am wandering in the unknown

Just keeping steadfast faith all along

And will keep smiling throughout

In this path

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like the literal message you're giving here. We are always looking for answers in life, and usually they seem like they'll be out of reach forever. I noticed that you use "just" a lot in the second half of the poem. Maybe in the first line of the third stanza, say "I harbor (or ask) so many questions" instead? That would make the words a little more colorful.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Faith is all that is needed Dushyant.You will go a long way.Nice work.Thank you :)

[sarah]

indeed something we all have experenced great poem!

[An owl on the moon]

It is such an insight to see inside you.. what brings you pain or peace.. what stirs certain feelings and emotion... And questioning seems to come from those who want to live deeper lives.. not just get by.. Thought provoking, my friend.

[Helpless]

we can all relate to this

[WordNerd]

Excellent poem! =]