The Troubled Beautiful Soul

I just wrote my thoughts on the world once again with me being the first person, in a little bit of story format. And this is one thing that is happening everywhere.

I see a beautiful soul

In troubled anxiety

That soul doesn't deserve that

She  just gets it

Its painful to see

The world playing

Its so very foul ploys

With one such soul

I just see her crying in pain

Almost all the time

In fact she just came to me

Asking for some support

I just didn't know what to do

So I just spoke to her

And tried to be there

And just be strong

But in such cases

We don't know what to do

We just feel helpless

But we just don't show it

So I had to man up

Man up for her

I just wanted one thing

A smile or a chuckle from her

Why is life so harsh

On such beautiful souls

Aren't we taught when we were kids

That the evil ones are always punished

The day justice prevails

Is the day beautiful souls will be happy

And till then at least

Don't make the torture that painful

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

This will pass as a really short story, and a beautiful one. In fact, people usually take interest in only their feelings.. So writing about someone else is always Special, despite the genre.

And yes, The Good do prevail in the end. So, don't worry, "Beautiful Souls" may seldom get hurt, but in actuality, they are happier than the "Evil ones".. And as we know, happiness is the ultimate prize for the soul.

Keep writing.

[Priyanka Natesh]

This is yet another lovely,touching poem.Beautiful souls are often misunderstood and we know that,don't we ;) ?I guess we should stop pining for attention from the 'ugly' souls and start to look out for our better counterparts,n'est pas?Lovely poem though!Loved the way you weaved your feelings into a little story.Thank you! :)

[sarah]

Sometimes the evil don't get punished on this earth but God will punish them far worse then our justice system ever could great poem!

[Dracon4]

wow man, this is one of your best yet:)

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I'm going to borrow a little bit from Craig and say that this poem was refreshingly compassionate. You aren't the only one who is asking these questions and seeing these troubled souls. I did notice that word "just" seemed to pop up quite often in this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

These words reveal such a golden soul.. your compassion and love for another to make appeals.. wishes for them.. knowing that she deserves better.. perhaps longing to do all to bring her joy. One person with such a heart can change the world of another to be sure.