Materialistic Hyberbole

Materialistic Hyberbole

A Poem by Dushyant Thadani

People everywhere want something
Material which makes them happy
Guys look at technology and cars
And just stare at them in amazement

But the real exaggeration is with shoes
Clothes, bags, accessories and many others
Mainly with women as victims
Who just can't look through this

They not only buy them a lot
But stack them together and forget about them
This world is just so crazy
Living in this materialistic hyperbole makes me crazy

Even though I can't blame anyone for this
Because this world is filled with material
And people convincing you to buy the material
And you just end up living with the material.

© 2011 Dushyant Thadani


Author's Note

Dushyant Thadani
This is a dedication to all the women. I am sorry to put this forth, but I saw in this movie, that this girl had a major obsession with shoes. I hope you don't mind this work.

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it's very cute :) and as for what u call obsession for shoes, i think it's a matter of vanity and grace for a woman...that completes a woman . We probably can't get it; it's a woman who can realise it :) :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some girls are like this indeed

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's all marketing to our basic needs of wanting to belong. We aren't cool or hip until we have the latest. Good job on expressing it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's such a game really... people wanting to make money getting us all to believe that we want... no need things to make us happy.. satisfied.. But there's always something new coming just around the corner.. Sometimes ignorance really is bliss..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

true!! this is soo true!
yes! i am a woman and i admit it! XDD

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dushyant Thadani
Dushyant Thadani

Dubai, United Arab Emirates, United Arab Emirates



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Just a simple homo sapien, who loves to be away from normal, free from norms and try to start a new era through writing. Hope this isn't a dream, and I hope I am capable enough to achieve what I hope .. more..

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