The Perfect Picture

I saw a picture of someone I love. It made my day. I dedicate this poem to that person

Just a little picture

Can make your heart race

Even when you are so low

And your happiness is a no go

But her picture just got me a smile

The brightest I had today

It was just so perfect

It was the equivalent of being with her

I was feeling really crazy

God! I was so happy

I wish I could get into that picture

And kiss her

But now I have to do away

With the picture with me today

It was a special one

The one which made my day

Reviews

[Thea Fuentebella]

AW:)
lucky girl, whoever she is.
but i disagree with the picture being the equivalent of being with her. you'll just miss her more, right?!
funny, i DO sometimes wish i could just go inside a picture and kiss my hon there. wee
what are you yapping about being an amateur writer? stop bragging XD
great job!

[sarah]

This is really sweet I wrote a poem like this a hint of sadness but good write!

[Loner]

I must say she sure is some lucky woman who can make u so happy just when u see her picture , sweet dedication !

[E.H. Monroe]

This was like a Bon Jovi 80's power ballad. Get a goddamn guitar and make a million bucks. Jumping in the picture, a simple concept but really shows the passion you got.

Nicely done

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful dedication... how just an image of the one you love can pour forth such joyful expressions.. I know that feeling well, and I wouldn't trade it for the world...

[Jeff]

Good job on this one! Sometimes those pictures can bring back the best memories and brighten your day as you said!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awww! i so romantic! this truly is the perfect picture!