The Overwhelmed Friend

The Overwhelmed Friend

A Poem by Dushyant Thadani
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Another story of my life, which shows my own personality and how does it act as a barrier when I am trying to improve my friendship with the other.

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I know I am a little overwhelmed
With friendship and with love
I know I am too excited
With new people around me

I know I must control it
Because I might lose out on them
I know that its not easy
But for the society I must do it

But you should know that I am afraid
Of losing you as a friend
It is like a thousand daggers in my heart
When you don't return my call

I know I am not the best socially
But you should know I care
I won't say that I am THE best friend
But I can say that I am a friend who cares

© 2011 Dushyant Thadani


Author's Note

Dushyant Thadani
This time there aren't any questions.

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this is so sweet :) i bet your friend for whom you wrote this to is really happy to read this :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful tribute paid to frienship ..... must be a lucky friend for whom
u have written from within.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work on the topic of friendship...Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cute, i really like this. friendship poems are the best

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Friendships sometimes fade away and it's hard to maintain them once life pulls you in five different directions. This was a good way to show your emotions!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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pfft, damn society and the poeple who run it! be yourself man, and you'll attract the right kind of poeple, nice peice

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on January 20, 2011
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Dushyant Thadani
Dushyant Thadani

Dubai, United Arab Emirates, United Arab Emirates



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Just a simple homo sapien, who loves to be away from normal, free from norms and try to start a new era through writing. Hope this isn't a dream, and I hope I am capable enough to achieve what I hope .. more..

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