Is Everyday A New Day???

Interesting question, but does anyone have an answer

These streets I see everyday

Have a different tale each day

I walk these streets whenever I can

Just like a carefree little man

To just take a glance on this new day

I see many smiling and laughing

And I see a few wailing

I see people begging for alms

And I see a few just turning their arms

But I can't see a new hope glowing

Just glance at these people everyday

People who just pass by you each day

And just ask yourself a question

And give yourself no suggestion

Is it the same around here each day?

Reviews

[Jeff]

Interesting piece. Very social conscious.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Well written. It draws attention to the enigma of hope and poverty. Very well described.

[Nothing Personal]

Its a great thought , a brilliant one if i may say. You convey a lot by asking that question Is it the same around here each day. You express the frustrations of a static scenario in a ever changing world, of bureaucracies which fail to bring the necessary measures which they so easily should have implemented as well as the concept of timelessness when time flows by. I love the implications i could draw from your poem. I like your observer frame as a poet. Great job Dushyant. Keep writing as good as this... I love this one :-)

[Loner]

Really thought provoking .

[Akshat♥]

i guess i never thought that way...
amazing write...new thought..
continue writing..
good work:)

[Shashank]

good thought provoking work dushyant... keep it up..