The Grim Trigger

The Grim Trigger

A Poem by Dushyant Thadani
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Actions of person can affect anyone. So think before you leap.

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We just pull the trigger
Without thinking deeper
About the cause of that action
And the equal and opposite reaction
Just being callous about the effect
Which in the long run will be a defect
Just think once more
Before stepping on the grim floor.

© 2010 Dushyant Thadani


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wow..... very dark, but i agree, very powerful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

damn man i love it, very powerful. gives a very good message
keep it up

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely and a matter of fact message delivered by this poem .......... great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good message here. We all must remember we are not as insignificant as we may feel somedays.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very true. suicidal tendencies flash through all our minds atleast once in our life. its up to us to control that urge

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dushyant Thadani
Dushyant Thadani

Dubai, United Arab Emirates, United Arab Emirates



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Just a simple homo sapien, who loves to be away from normal, free from norms and try to start a new era through writing. Hope this isn't a dream, and I hope I am capable enough to achieve what I hope .. more..

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