The Most Confusing Mystery- Life

Its a question man needs answers to.

Are we living an illusion

Or is this a dream

Thinking about this is a concussion

Or are we challenging our own realm

Is this world a magician's stage

Choosing His trickery wisely

Or is this our soul's image

Moving it intimately

Is this mystery ever going to be solved

Who knows?

But till then I am still confused

Will this mystery end in a curfew?

Reviews

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. beautifully written, dushyant ... very skillful use of words too ... and immensely expressive ... i think that the world is bearable because some people still respond well to other humans and are sensitive ... that's why dreams still come true ... but the others ... well ... either they don't respond at all or are reactive ... that's my explanation for what seems like an illusion and what doesn't ... just my thoughts ... your poem is awesome ...

[slayerjay]

Awesome flow...great poem

[Loner]

Real depth in thoughts nice flow.

[Jeff]

Life is an illusion. It's what we make of it, and what our mind is speaking to us.

[Dracon4]

I see you were inspired by the illusionist, yes?
I like the flow of thoughts here, nicely written:)

[Poeticpiers]

The eastern sages say all is illusion
That we create the things we see.
Each must draw their own conclusion
on how to solve the mystery.

I am content to wait and see
I see no reason to make haste
You're free to disagree with me
I realy have no time to waste
I'm far too busy being me.
I live each day as best I can.
Nothing extraordinary.
I''m just an ordinary man.