Giving Up on Dreams

Deflated by times passing

Strength going down each day

Feel like drowning on a daily basis

The second I feel like I've given up

Given up on pursuing my dreams

Given up on working for it's success

Given up the day I become too comfortable

Given up especially when I feel I actually have

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Just to see the title of your inspiration made my heart fall... and your words show so powerfully... so darkly how hopelessness can knock us to the ground... Here I still sense a heart willing to fight, even through all the pain.