Luxurious Inspiration

A story of seduction

You are my divine

luxurious inspiration,

desire's exquisite tattoo

stenciled, as an elegant seduction

sensually stripping me...

finding myself unashamedly bare.

Your intention is my rainbow, 

bending to caress dreams

now blossoming 

a magickal imagination,

clustered in geodes, sparkling

crystalline feminine longing...

encapsulated by satisfaction.

I am we

and we are whetted,

tears falling, a cut tension

glistening with temptation's surrender;

ecstasy honed, in the fires of bliss...

delivering an invitation

promised me in your kiss. 

 

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

OMG ! Guess what just happened after reading this?
I was going to write:, that you are turning into a great love composer like Valentino.
I was afraid you might not know of him without the first name. I wasn't sure my memory was correct. So I guessed and googled it.
Yup I was right. Rudolph Valentino. Then it struck me. All these thoughts right here... Right now.. on Christmas Eve.. Rudolph.......Valentino.... HA... Is your nose shining bright?

[David Scott]

Ha! Me? Rudolph? I might need to cut back on the crown... Too funny.
Thank you for your encouragement however. You are kind as always.

[Cryingkate]

No My Friend, I know it's hard for you to do,
But you must learn to wear your Crown with grace.
You earned it. Your on a roll...
Ps. Merry Christmas ! Thank You for leaving me such a nice Greetings on my comment page.
I'll return the kindness when I figure out how to do it. I forgot LOL

[emmajoy]

Beautiful thoughts, beautifully written. Your heart writes with a very warm pen, Mr. Scott. Love ripples the airwaves at this time of year. Maybe that creates the most wonderful of gifts: words for your darling wrapped in starlight.

[David Scott]

Indeed the best gifts are from the heart...
Thank you for taking the time to read.

[andrew mitchell]

David ,you deep romantic you! not even an air guitar! Love poetry in motion is right here! terrific stuff to win any Woman's love

[David Scott]

Thank you Andrew. One does what one may.

[Willard Wells]

"promised me in your kiss". I like that part the most. Nice love piece. Nothing like a good love poem for your love.

[David Scott]

I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic expression.

[...]

Wow...this is liquid lava and mist forming new fertile ground. Amazing imagery, rich language, and steeaaammmy :)

[David Scott]

I'm auditioning for "Lavaboy". Ha.
Thanks for the enthusiastic review.

[emmajoy]

Time needed the airing, the journey was worth the time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my best girl has always been the muse...and she is seductive...i just can't resist her...

and when the creative whirl in the sheets of paper is over...i do long for a cigarette...too bad i quit many years ago---

j.

[David Scott]

Ha... Well, I guess we understand each other. 😀
Thank you for you comments Jacob.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully encapsulating that special something only a special someone can be muse to.
Superb.

[David Scott]

Thank you for the review. This is heartfelt for sure.

[Cherry]

How beautifully done. I want to write like this someday.

[David Scott]

You are kind... I am sure you can and already do. We write our hearts my friend. Thank you for reading.