A response to cryingkate's poem, "RiverWords". This was the gut response to reading her poem and was not a work as much as the pure flow of inspiration. Thank you Kate.
Flowing
How
genteel thy words fall upon my eye...
And the voice, so polite while they take a seat in my mind.
Whence comes this messenger,
is it a Saint or friend of "Nick"?
Ah... we sigh together upon our parting,
this river and I.
Bathing in the birdsong of now,
ignoring the distant rumble of a sea
raging...
Mesmerized,
memorizing what is written between each heartbeat,
"Riverwords"
Lovely write, David :) My favorite line is "bathing in the birdsong of now"...so elegant, my friend
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Hey Lynn. It was either "birdsong" or "birdbath"... ha. ;0. I had to kid around on that one. read moreHey Lynn. It was either "birdsong" or "birdbath"... ha. ;0. I had to kid around on that one.
Thank you for stopping in.
beautiful words...i deeply enjoyed. 'is it a saint or friend of 'nick'', i mean, that is so outside of the box, but so fitting. words that fall softly upon me as well. lovely
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for the comment. Not sure where the line came from... Manic morning. ha.
Your thoughts and feelings do flow so beautifully, so tenderly like a vast river meandering across time. How amazing to me the way a mind works, to read and respond with such an elegant light. Brilliant.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Craig. I wish I could say I thought of it or came up with it, but alas, some writes are s.. read moreThank you Craig. I wish I could say I thought of it or came up with it, but alas, some writes are simply gifts from outside of our being. We get to be an imperfect filter of intentions I think... Anyhow, this is a different topic. You are kind to give such a review.
David,
You know how to take the Sensuousness Soul to the highest ground!
You really Do!
Stop... Don't Stop.. Don't Don't Stop......:-)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I think I just flushed with a blush... ha. You are very kind. Thank you for your comment Kate.read moreI think I just flushed with a blush... ha. You are very kind. Thank you for your comment Kate.
I did not think of this a sensuous, but all heartsongs lead to deeper connection, and this depth of spiritual communion is true sensuality after all.
8 Years Ago
Dang ! Of all times for your words to get cut off. Just when I had you blushing..... DANG!
Much like you...
Still, I can only ever be to you what you are willing to see of me. This is true of us all.
May we learn to see the best in each other.
I am happy to be friends with anyon.. more..