Erotic Symphony

The music of love.

She is an erotic symphony

complex beyond any moment’s clarity

while I am as simple as a lute’s melody.

Yet, when she invites me into her song…

our music rivals heaven’s choir.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

A beautiful yet gentle love poem and short verse. you got me. Well done. I seem to be using the word gentle in describing your work. I like that.

[David Scott]

Thank you so much. I am a gentle soul... Funny how I can also be accused of being intimidating at work... Funny.

[Willard Wells]

Well I understand that very well.

[daninstockholm]

lovely duet, like Phillip Glass and John Cage, in a sense. Beautiful music from the two seemingly exclusive concepts brought together so very well.

[David Scott]

Thank you for the comment. This poem just fell out of the air. I literally wrote it on the spot. read moreThank you for the comment. This poem just fell out of the air. I literally wrote it on the spot.
I love how these little gifts come to those willing to be open... Gratitude. :)

[ReedWrite]

Beautiful..simple...yet so complex.

[David Scott]

Little bit like a fine lady...;)
Thank you for reading.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh, yes! I love the sensuality the nuance of your words create here, David!

"complex beyond any moment’s clarity"
...perhaps you've unraveled our mystery, after all.

[David Scott]

Thank you...
A woman is a blissful complexity. Thank God for the gifts to sense her wonders...

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Create beautiful place and visions. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[David Scott]

Thank you friend. At least it was short enough the re-read didn't take all day. Ha.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very worthwhile read and you are welcome.

[Cryingkate]

Oh Dear,
The ringing of the vibrational pulse is ringing so loud and clear that even I am blushing.

[David Scott]

Ha. I think maybe you blush more than you realize. Thank you for reading.

[Cryingkate]

Uh Oh I hope that's not a sign that I think out loud more then I realize ;-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow... Nice...
A metaphoric delight..........

Well Done !! ..

Jazz

[David Scott]

Jazz is always welcome... ;) Thank you.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Beautiful........................... You are welcome... Jazz

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This is beautiful! Romantic, sensual, melodic, and full of heart, dear poet :)

[David Scott]

Thank you again for your time and reply. A woman is music in physical form...

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Thank you for your comments on my work. I look forward to reading more of your thoughts.

I love the passion and power of love in this well written piece.

I will return.

Alisa ;-)

[David Scott]

It is always a pleasure to meet new friends and find new writers to enjoy. Thank you for the reviews and for your kind words.

[Alisa Js]

You are most welcome.

Alisa💫

[Belle]

A pair of opposites which souls are made the same...Ah...beautiful poem, David!

[David Scott]

Hey Belle. :)
Thank you for stopping by. Good to see your words.