Spend Me

My version of an afternoon delight... Revised version. Much improved I think.. I hope you enjoy!

Spend Me 

I see you…

worry clouding your eyes

crinkle lines etching your face,

girlish prancing becomes a shuffle

 your spirit flops around the house

 like a fish,

too long out of water… 

Come to me…

before you suffocate

look deeply into my eyes,

lines will be lifted by a knowing smile

within the depths of my embrace

your spirit can swim

warm, moist kisses

 will arch your posture

 into finer form… 

You are longing…

no longer will parts of you ache

you will be touched,

nebulous gaze will swirl 

hypnotic,

mind will quiet

as desire billows deep… 

My hands…

rough with experience

 bring a knowing tenderness,

cupping flesh

 nesting your soul,

penetrating deeper than any pain

potency will linger in my kiss,

lips caressing

applying love’s salve

along every curve of your body...

And you will know me…

I will withhold nothing back

giving all I find

receiving all you offer as well,

investing our winnings

into this melding,

pouring my very being into loving you

until … 

Transcended…

You know I am yours,

pulling back your hair

 eyes dizzy with satisfaction

your trembling shoulders lift,

you pet this wildness

knowing it will never tame,

revived and replenished

your once fading heart

flirting a steady beat

upon my heaving chest.

willing and waiting

to once again be

spent…

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is outstanding. It comes across sincere and warm and sensual and just wonderfully written over all.

[David Scott]

Thank you KL. To write with a sincere tone while creating a sensual feel is more than I could hope to do on a consistent basis. I was very much in this moment when I wrote the poetry and I felt like I was giving a gift rather than satisfying myself. It was a meaningful experience for me to write this. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

[Relic]

Congrats on a great poem. Reading it was like reading a story of someone devoted to his mate and comforting her in a way that pleases both in a sensual way. Creative stuff.

[David Scott]

Thank you Relic. Nothing very creative here, but it was an honest snap shot of who I am and how I love. You are very kind.

[s y e]

Well hot damn, Pasta Man, I am pretty sure you turned the gas up. This was sexy and sweet all at once. Oh la la, cheeky cheeky. ;-)

What's cookin' good lookin'? LOL!

[David Scott]

Are you old enough to be reading this? ;)
Some day s you just feel like being spent... What else can I say?
Thank you for the review Noodles.

[s y e]

Well ya didn't make it mature. ;-)
Nothing more, you said it all.

[David Scott]

Ok... I guess it is PG 13. ;)

[s y e]

Only 13???

[Frieda P]

Now we know what you're doing for lunch break! Sweet, sassy and sexy all at the same time, I adore that fourth stanza...it could stand alone. Spent, would have been a better title, just my humble opinion of course .

You're a crazy rascal hon... ;-)

[David Scott]

Well, I am asking to be "spent"... It is like finding a money tree! Ha. The more you spend the more you have to spend...
Yes, I do love my lunch breaks.
Thank you for stopping in Frieda. I know you are very busy catching up with everyone here who loves you so very much. :)

[Frieda P]

Well my lunch breaks aren't as fortuitous as yours it seems... ;-) If I'm spending I want it to be cold hard cash, otherwise, well you know the ending to that story. My pleasure Scott, and Buon appetito! ;-P

[John Anderson]

This is extremely well written with great emotion and fine description

[David Scott]

Thank you John. What can I say... I was in the mood. :)

[AprilRN1210]

sweet tender romance, raw passion, steamy sex, what more could a girl ask for? This is one hell of a write, wow. I loved each breathtaking moment from the tiny details to the overwhelming emotion that hits you over the head and leaves you wanting more.

[David Scott]

Thank you for reading. I guess it is good to be wanting more sometimes... ;) Especially when there is always more to be given.

[AprilRN1210]

Indeed it is.... you are quite welcome, it was my pleasure.

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW...David, this one is real life, real love, real lust. When two people love one another fully and accept one another's faults and fears, the love making is the elixir of life....no quickie with a stranger can compare. The wrinkles disappear, the wispy ends of hair are suddenly perfectly coiffed and the smiles are genuine......ah, yes, this is love the way it should be. Fantastic! Lydi**

[David Scott]

Thank you Lydi. I am humbled to receive such a complimentary review. I will strive to show up "perfectly coiffed" more often. ;)
No wrinkles sounds great too! ha.
You are a kind friend.

[MagicAl]

Oh very sexy! Sultry and passionate all portrayed with beautiful words.. really enjoyed this :)

[David Scott]

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts Al.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh wow, Scott, the sensualness of this poem is only matched by the overwhelming love shown to your muse. Such a combination of tenderness and heat, this is quite lovely and such a breathtaking write. To be everything for one another and take all the worry, pain and tension of life away, in an embrace, a passionate kiss, and act divine... well that is truly heaven. Fantastic work as always!

[David Scott]

Thank you K. I am blessed to receive this inspiration from my muse... It is a gift to myself to be able to express it thus.
I am happy you enjoyed the poem.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I did, I always do enjoy your work. Have a lovely day :D