Spend Me

My version of an afternoon delight... Revised version. Much improved I think.. I hope you enjoy!

Spend Me 

I see you…

worry clouding your eyes

crinkle lines etching your face,

girlish prancing becomes a shuffle

 your spirit flops around the house

 like a fish,

too long out of water… 

Come to me…

before you suffocate

look deeply into my eyes,

lines will be lifted by a knowing smile

within the depths of my embrace

your spirit can swim

warm, moist kisses

 will arch your posture

 into finer form… 

You are longing…

no longer will parts of you ache

you will be touched,

nebulous gaze will swirl 

hypnotic,

mind will quiet

as desire billows deep… 

My hands…

rough with experience

 bring a knowing tenderness,

cupping flesh

 nesting your soul,

penetrating deeper than any pain

potency will linger in my kiss,

lips caressing

applying love’s salve

along every curve of your body...

And you will know me…

I will withhold nothing back

giving all I find

receiving all you offer as well,

investing our winnings

into this melding,

pouring my very being into loving you

until … 

Transcended…

You know I am yours,

pulling back your hair

 eyes dizzy with satisfaction

your trembling shoulders lift,

you pet this wildness

knowing it will never tame,

revived and replenished

your once fading heart

flirting a steady beat

upon my heaving chest.

willing and waiting

to once again be

spent…

Reviews

[David Scott]

This is so intense, and full of love, for one, you want to protect, and you intensely care of, you understand what true love is, and what it is to be fragile, and that's just why you can feel the other so well, and will protect (her). It's good to read your fantastic art again, there is so much in between the lines, here, I adore. I can truly tell you, she's lucky to have such a protector. (that's truly what I feel with this write). Thank you so much for bringing this treasure to life..

- Elisa

[David Scott]

I will strive to be worthy of your review Eli. I think you fairy nic-name might be Elil... ;)

Oh that's a great name! never thought of it... thank you for making me another!! :D You are welcome, I know you will be worthy of it... be assure too! ;)

[Pax]

how you spend and spent your love, truly shows how careful how you see and understand your significant other. How you seduce with such passionate manner that doesn't force, it just flow smoothly... the power of your poetry mr. David is well spent :) great job!

[David Scott]

Thank you for your thoughtful review Pax. I am happy the poem reads this way to you.

[Shaquana Adams]

:)
This was a very enjoyable read. Great job!
-QuanaWana

[David Scott]

Thank you QuanaWana.
Everything has a price, sometimes it is a joy to pay up. :)

[livetowrite]

i enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing

[David Scott]

Thank you writer. Live well and write with prosperity of the soul.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is such a deep love poem, i really liked the early fish references, the way you used them....would have liked if you had gone back to it later...

but nevertheless, this is incredible...as Muse says...there is nothing cliche ever in your work...
it is so expressive.

[David Scott]

Thank you Jacob.
I like the advice in your review. You help me to become a better poet when you risk giving me constructive critique. Thank you for being a teacher to me today and for the complimentary review.

[Muse]

GAsp! Spend me, and I am spent! Since knowing you here on the cafe David I can say with absolute certainty that you have earned my respect as a fellow writer. There is nothing cliche about the love you share. Breathtaking originality, every word carefully written to draw the reader a clear picture of earnest love and a touchable passion.

[David Scott]

Thank you for this review Muse.
You speak carefully and when you choose to share your thoughts, I listen carefully.
I am honored to have your respect. It is a gift I will not neglect or take for granted.
You have my respect as well.
Honestly, I do not consider myself a true writer... One day, maybe. Until then, I thrive in the conversation and sharing here.
You have blessed me today. :)
Much love to you my friend.

[Muse]

The definition of a talented writer is in the eyes of the beholder. And to us on the cafe, you are definitely worth reading.

[David Scott]

Thank you Muse. It is an honor to keep such company.

[kublakhan27]

True poetic beauty my friend...great work :)

[David Scott]

Thank you Khan.

[Ma'at]

this poem is so sweet and emotional...all i can say...i loved this very much

[David Scott]

Thank you my spooky friend. :)

[Ma'at]

you are welcome :)

[Matching Socks]

Phew... I'm spent.
Enjoyable reading. :)

[David Scott]

I have always been an impulsive spender myself... ;)
Thank you for reading.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :) shop til you drop then...

[David Scott]

Exactly! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so great David.You managed to be sexy and sweet at the same time.Loved this for sure :)

[David Scott]

Thank you Vidya. You managed to be sweet and intelligent, as per usual for you, with your review. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...thank you and you are welcome :)