I am Your Whisper

The magic of listening and being heard.

I am the whisper

others do not hear.

They only see the beast tamed,

applauding a dancing coordination.

 Ah, but this animal is not tame;

a bestial heart pumps within.

Protecting with a ferociousness

you only experience in our love.

 At first I am only

 the tickle of a gentle breeze,

tempestuously rising

 in the passion of you.

We ride the Elysium fields,

while mortal creatures sleep.

Wild

I am collared,

captured by your listening ear.

Within you, this whisper stirs

a vibration of harmonic pulse

until the sky is split.

Torrential is the song of our union,

raining until the cloud is spent,

I hover within you,

a foggy melody of recognition.

 Your lips kiss me good morning

as I slip past your tongue,

I am

your breath of life;

your whisper.

 

Reviews

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This is sensual and purely raw and sexual A whispering beast...the low roar of a lions bass :)

[David Scott]

Ha... I was thinking a bear... or a dragon if we go into fantasy. :) I am glad you enjoyed the write and felt the intensity I was going for. A quiet power.

[David Scott]

I actually just edited this after you read it... I need to reformat all of my poetry.
Thank you again for the review.

[...]

I can see the dragon, yes, but not a bear, and still, definitely a lion for his every breath vibrates deep rich animal presence

[David Scott]

:) Well, I have always admired lions, I just never identified with them sharing their qualities with me. You are kind to see such a beauty in the words.

[MomzillaNC]

Very sexy…

. . . . . . :D

[David Scott]

I guess we all have our moments... ;)
Thank you for reading zilla.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[stars are far]

wow that was very creative and well done... good job

[David Scott]

Thank you star gazer. I tried my best on this one. :)

[Relic]

This is rich with metaphors that make the reader think and contemplate. The depth of the words and their use are splendidly used. There is depth even to a whisper and you've highlighted it as only a poet can.

[David Scott]

Thank you Relic. I think you do understand the subtleties of a whisper well from the way you write your poetry. Of course, you can also "raise your voice" very well with some of your satire as well. :)

[John Anderson]

This is a well written piece

[David Scott]

Thank you John.

[J. J. Nightingale]

wow-E WOW WOW !

Don't know what to say... ahhh

Wish THINGS could really be

THAT way...

Soft-Sweet-Hot...............Jazz

[David Scott]

Things can and do go this way... Even if it sis only in a bit of jazz filling the space in a smoky lounge. I find we experience what we are willing to claim or accept. Accept this experience and deny yourself the reality of your pain. (this is my own self talk, if I had perfected it, I would write better poetry...)
Thank you so much for stopping in and for the expressive review. I am so happy I got a "wow-E WOW WOW !" :) My very first one. Ha.

[J. J. Nightingale]

... You r welcome....................:)

[AprilRN1210]

I feel such fierce contrasts of passion and tenderness. What a beautiful gift it is to let that beast out of the cage, release that passion that you hide from everyone else and enjoy the pleasure of just being yourself with that special someone. That person who's heart whispers to your soul. The one who is the very breath of your life, who's light shines in your heart, and who's soul understands and loves you for who you are. Absolutely lovely..

[David Scott]

Thank you April. I like where your mind went here.

[AprilRN1210]

You are welcome.. I like where my mind went too:)

[Laura Harrison]

This is so beautiful, well penned :)

[David Scott]

Thank you very much my happy combustible friend.

[Ruth]

A fav - everything about this is stunning..I have run out of words to convey the beauty of your writing! lol Just know I loved this, immensely x

[David Scott]

Blushing... :)
Thank you Poppy. You may inspire me to write again.

[Ruth]

Good! ;) My pleasure x