Le Blanc

One of my favorite resorts...

 

Le Blanc curtains dance,

Seductive and unpredictable.

Fixation  ~   a hidden history  ~  valences truth.

 

Caribbean breezes…

Thick with salty evaporate,

Sheer  ~ Twirled and twisted ~   delicately draped.

 

Persistent urging tosses with youthful abandon,

Wanting is as a distant echo of the calling gulls.

Blowing  ~ balance tipping~  in enthusiastic swaying.

 

A crystal clear wall of refracting dreams,

Topples over and tangles in millions of moments

Billowing ~ momentum rises ~ tumbling over.

 

Satisfactions surfing in a rip tide flurry of jubilant displacement.

Time deposited sands creating the beach of our lives.

Foaming breakers ~ tangled reaching ~ across millions of moments.

 

Yesterday dreams visualized in shades of black and white,

Today shine in digital, high definition orbs of color,

Wrapped ~ naked perfection ~  in Le Blanc lace.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Is this a nudist resort Scott... Ooh la la, ha, seriously, I could use a spa right now, had the day from hell and this was just what the doctor ordered, or the dentist, whichever the case may be ;-)....enjoyed!

[David Scott]

Ha!
No... Maybe in another life. Very beautiful resort though.
Very restorative place to be emotionally and physically.
Sorry your day was rough... :(
Happy to lift your spirits! :) Yeah!
Always grateful to see your comments.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure always, and I can't wait for this day to be over, but your poem did bring a smile to my face, so that's always a good thang sweetie. ;-) x

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I love when people write with the idea of travel in mind. The flow and imagery felt like a vacation fully realized and enjoyed. Nicely done.

[David Scott]

Thank you for your comments Sarah.
Been there, going back! Three weeks and counting...

[Sami Khalil]

A lucky man you are David. This was a beautiful cruise of words and imagery that is so Caribbean with the sensuality of the moments... I know you are excited and the family. Gracious for writing this poem...:)

[David Scott]

Thank you Sami.
I am looking forward to a week in Cancun!

[Sami Khalil]

That should be lovely. Have fun...:)

[Dye]

Not only does this sound like a beautiful place to visit, it sounds like you will have wonderful time as well ;) I love the subtleties within this. Reading between the lines has all the sensual pleasures that an escape like Le Blanc is sure to bring. Of course, I can read sexual innuendos in almost everything I read. But this was tastefully done with the right amount of hinting. A pleasure indeed!

[David Scott]

Yes, I intend for the reader to se sensuality here. I would be surprised if any adult did not...
read moreYes, I intend for the reader to se sensuality here. I would be surprised if any adult did not...
I hope my wife gets the hint! ha.
I have little doubt about that.
Thank you for reading this poetry. I am enjoying "planning" the trip... Oh, it will be a wonderful time.

[Dye]

I think WC cut your comment short. I hate when that happens.

To me the sensuality shined through for sure in this then, well done.

[Lydia Shutter]

This poem has almost a Caribbean cruise feel to it. The world is black and white and then you go on the cruise and multicolored peace and serenity envelop you! The clouds puff out just for you and the gulls sing for you too. I know I feel that way when we cruise. The "Le Blanc" reference leads me to believe it was a Caribbean resort you went to though. "Refracting dreams" what an image! Just a lovely write. Lydi**

[David Scott]

Yes, Cancun to be exact. It is a very nice resort. Going there in November! Yeah!!!!
Thank you for reading.

[Lydia Shutter]

Aha, I thought so! :)