Le Blanc

One of my favorite resorts...

 

Le Blanc curtains dance,

Seductive and unpredictable.

Fixation  ~   a hidden history  ~  valences truth.

 

Caribbean breezes…

Thick with salty evaporate,

Sheer  ~ Twirled and twisted ~   delicately draped.

 

Persistent urging tosses with youthful abandon,

Wanting is as a distant echo of the calling gulls.

Blowing  ~ balance tipping~  in enthusiastic swaying.

 

A crystal clear wall of refracting dreams,

Topples over and tangles in millions of moments

Billowing ~ momentum rises ~ tumbling over.

 

Satisfactions surfing in a rip tide flurry of jubilant displacement.

Time deposited sands creating the beach of our lives.

Foaming breakers ~ tangled reaching ~ across millions of moments.

 

Yesterday dreams visualized in shades of black and white,

Today shine in digital, high definition orbs of color,

Wrapped ~ naked perfection ~  in Le Blanc lace.

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading this one..I like the comparisons and metaphors..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Sara

[David Scott]

Thank you for all if your reviews. I will enjoy paying you a visit again soon as time allows.
We love this resort.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

David,

You are quite welcome..

Sara

[s y e]

This is a lovely piece David - I love the memories that have been created, the fact that our memories create the person we are today... life is magical in a way.

This is a lovely read David, great job

[David Scott]

Thank you for your comments Noodles. Life is magical and you are a lovely part of the magic in life as well. Love to see your thoughts here.

[icelandicblue]

This entire piece is truly gorgeous. It takes the reader to settings of such beauty and contentment. All these things, all these memories create who were are and where we've been:

Time deposited sands creating the beach of our lives.

And the hope of more memories to make resides in all of us. This was a joy to read.

[David Scott]

Thank you for picking up on the thought in that line Blue. Yes, we have a collection of moments to create our beach of memories and the future is out before us as an infinite expanse of beach...
Thank you for you lovely comments.

[Tom]

An enriching and soulful place it surely must be !

[David Scott]

Yes it is... Glad you could feel the mood.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Beautifully written! You've ignited a strong craving in me to be there. Amazing job!

[David Scott]

Thank you for the comment Gleb.

[Epipsychologist]

This is one of those poems that works on a few levels, yet still stands on its own as immediately pleasant. Makes me wish I was an islander.

[David Scott]

Thank you again.
You are correct to observe the layers.
It is funny my wife's first comment after I read this to her was to say, "You wrote a lot of hidden meanings in there." ha.
Yet it is enjoyable to give the reader something delicious to the soul as well as nourishing when digested fully...

[Horizon K.]

Lots of Tildas here... See, they're sexy dancing things... They go well with the breeze and salted Caribbean air... and lovemaking between (or not between) some sheer satin sheets... Very sultry and seductive read Scott. Love the heady vision you created in a very classy way...

[David Scott]

Welcome to Le Blanc... ;)
Thank you for you generosity of spirit here.
Yes, I was in a "saultry" mood.
Soon! Going Nov 9th!!! Yeah.

[Horizon K.]

Have fun!!! I'm so jealous:D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is an enticement to be read over and over...
Is my mind playing tricks on me?...or did I feel a warm Caribbean breeze blow my way? lol ;)

Well done... lovely write, my sweet Unicorn!~xoxo~ :)

[David Scott]

Your mind is in fine order... ;)
Thank you for reading and for your comments Robbie. I mean doctor. ha.
This is sort of my way to prime the mental and emotional pump for a great trip.
I am so happy you felt the "enticement" in this poem.
As always, you have given me a smile.
Have a lovely day!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Mission accomplished! I love it when your smiling... and you make me smile in return...
I enjoyed this read, love... Nicely done!~xoxo~:)

[Tate Morgan]

Sounds like a party in the Caribbean for sure

[David Scott]

An intimate party for two... Yes.
A favorite place to visit.

[Rita L. Sev]

You paint a lovely and relaxing picture of this place, David I love the billowing lace imagery you have woven throughout the piece - a really well crafted poem, that makes me crave a vacation...

[David Scott]

Thank you Rita. You got the picture! Yeah. :)
We are going back in a few weeks!!!! I can hardly wait.