Beautiful Sky

Beautiful Sky

A Poem by Drew Peterson

Waking up in the morning

Stepping out side

Feeling the

Chilly air hitting my skin.

  

Watching the ball of fire

 Slowly Raising high in to

The sky.

 

Seeing the beauty of inspirational

Colors above me. Hearing

The birds chirping

And flying in

The Reddish sky

 

   

 

© 2012 Drew Peterson


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I always thought at dawn it was like the darkness of the night surrendering to the colour of the Sun. A wonderful triumph of life every day, every single mundane and bland day there for your own viewing a spectacular triumph of the Universe.

This piece for me captures that feeling superbly, it is short and sweet like the dawn always is but has all the hope and inspiration that such a thing bears. Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I shall have to read more of your work now.

Congratulations and thank you,
A.E.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely capture of nature in this. Love the ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I always thought at dawn it was like the darkness of the night surrendering to the colour of the Sun. A wonderful triumph of life every day, every single mundane and bland day there for your own viewing a spectacular triumph of the Universe.

This piece for me captures that feeling superbly, it is short and sweet like the dawn always is but has all the hope and inspiration that such a thing bears. Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I shall have to read more of your work now.

Congratulations and thank you,
A.E.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Drew Peterson
Drew Peterson

River Falls, WI



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Hi i am Drew i am 18 i love writing all kinds of poetry and love reading all kinds... how i started writing is i fight deppresion and adhd. and alot of my work comes from the human nature or just .. more..

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