Coffee House
A Poem by
Drew Peterson
Walk through the doors
Smelling all kinds
Of
Coffee
Looking at the
Inspirational
Art work
On the
Wall
Sipping on my
Steamy hot
Minty coffee
Getting the good
Vibes
Listening to all of
The emotional
Poets speak from
Their hearts
Hearing the
Jazz band rocking
The walls
© 2012 Drew Peterson
Reviews
Makes me feel good even though I don't like coffee at all. I think it's good to just get to the point. Like it
Posted 12 Years Ago
it's really simple. i like it. makes me feel like i'm actually sitting in a coffee house.
Posted 12 Years Ago
it's really simple. i like it. makes me feel like i'm actually sitting in a coffee house.
Love it, nice write... i want to that someday, still haven't. Would be nice to sit back and relax with poetry surrounding the coffee house.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Love it, nice write... i want to that someday, still haven't. Would be nice to sit back and relax with poetry surrounding the coffee house.
This is a good poem the only things that I would as a suggestion is use a different word for coffee. Repeating the same word so close in the short piece was distracting for me but it is still a good piece. Filled with aromas and melodies.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a good poem the only things that I would as a suggestion is use a different word for coffee. Repeating the same word so close in the short piece was distracting for me but it is still a good piece. Filled with aromas and melodies.
oh i love the smell of a coffee shop! This reminds me, i desperately want to own my own bookshop/coffee house one day! thanks for sharing :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
oh i love the smell of a coffee shop! This reminds me, i desperately want to own my own bookshop/coffee house one day! thanks for sharing :)
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Added on January 24, 2012
Last Updated on February 28, 2012
Author
Drew Peterson River Falls, WI
About
Hi i am Drew i am 18 i love writing all kinds of poetry and love reading all kinds... how i started writing is i fight deppresion and adhd.
and alot of my work comes from the human nature or just ..
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