Doomsday: A Day of LoveA Story by Charlie DuhadI grasped the cell
phone in my hand, using all my energy to just look at the buttons. I was going
to die in just hours, why couldn’t I just call her. After pondering it in my
head, I finally punched in the numbers, and listened to the ringing. While it
did so, somewhere deep inside, wanted no one to answer, for me to be alone
while I died. I wasn’t even with my family. They hadn’t noticed that I escaped
to the sanctuary of my room. But the ringing stopped, and just as I was about
to hang up, I heard the angelic voice of Hannah just barely whisper out, crippled with fear, “Hello?” There was a short pause. I didn’t
exactly know what to say. I knew what my intentions were, but would she
understand? My question would soon be answered, but on my mind at that exact
moment was the topic of mutilation. Days ago, scientists discovered a giant
meteor the size of Jupiter, twenty times denser, and it was going to crush the
earth. But this time we wouldn’t have any Bruce Willis to save us. It was
indeed the real deal, and I had no clue what to do. My mind was racing, and all
I could think about was getting this done. I had liked this Hannah for quite
some time now, some would even consider the word love, and never really talked
to her. She was always a point of admiration, but never a person who I could
associate with. Until now. The world was ending, what did I have to worry
about? We were both juniors in high school. We were both mature enough people
to understand what was going on. Nonetheless, my last goal of my life was to
actually talk to her, or more. I didn’t really know her, so I figured it was
worth a try. I finally managed to choke out an answer, “Is this Hannah?” “Yes…” she said, a little more
tension in her voice. “Ok, I’ll be prompt with you. We’re
both about to die,” At this I heard a noise on the other end of the line, most
likely from her sobbing or sniffling. “Can you just tell me where you live so I
can talk to you in person?” I waited for her answer, perhaps for
too long. Had I not been so eager I might have figured she had hung up on me.
But I waited, for what seemed like days, but I knew they couldn’t have been
since, I would be dead then. She then replied back with where she was, and to
come in through the back, she would let me in through her window. I breathed a
small sigh of relief. She somehow knew, if not all of my intentions, but at
least my relative goal. I bode my family a farewell, improper of course, I
didn’t actually say anything to them. They never really noticed me, and at this
time they were all sleeping together in the living room. I snuck out the back
and hopped up onto my bike. I pedaled as hard as I could to where she said she
lived. On the way over, I realized that I was doing what I had always wanted
to. Riding to my true love’s house in the middle of the night, expecting a lot
of emotion and talking. It just wasn’t exactly the scenario I was hoping for.
What I had always imagined was me coming just outside her window, in the front
yard, and serenading her. Perhaps with a Peter Gabriel song… Even so, I reached her house in a
matter of minutes, leaving me with about two and a half hours to talk to her. I
went to the back like she said to, and while I did, I noticed everything about
her house. Everything about her, her face, her clothes, her overall look,
screamed that she was special. She just had this vibe about her that
I…well…loved. But this backyard was one of a normal person. Not a house
deserving of this angel. I walked quietly through the backyard, making sure I
made not one noise at all. For if I did, my whole night would be ruined. I walked up to the window, and
knocked three times. To my surprise, the knock didn’t echo throughout the
house. God always seemed to try and ruin my love life, which was nonexistent,
why not now? She quickly got to the window and opened it for me, and I crawled
in. On her face she bore a look a complete fear. But through the fear I could
see the beauty. She had gorgeous blonde hair; with centered green eyes
complementing all of her other features. She had an amazing body, maybe not in
most people’s else’s eyes, but in mine it was. I took around her room, and saw
all of the pictures of her, at much happier times. Her features were much
better outlined, and she appeared ten times as beautiful in them. And she was,
right now, the most gorgeous woman in the world anyways. She sat down on her
bed, and asked me what I wanted. “I want you.” I said, and then I saw
her face turn from frightened to scared and frightened. I figured I had been
too straightforward, but I continued, “I’ve avoided you ever since I saw you. I
just wanted to finally actually…talk to you.” She looked back at the ground,
and stared at it, not knowing what to say. Tears swelled in her eyes, and I
knew she thought this was a mistake. I sat down next to her on the bed, and put
my hand on her shoulder. “I know this is incredibly hard for you. But I think
you know just the one thing I want.” She continued to stare at the ground
for some time, until she finally looked up at me with a complete different
expression and uttered the words of my life. “You’re selfish. Everyone you know
is about to die, and all you can think about is kissing me?” She looked back at
the ground. I realized she was right. But this had been my goal for years, and
I wasn’t about to die without accomplishing it. I looked her in the eyes, and
she turned back to me. I gradually leaned in, as did she. My heart was racing.
After all she said, she was still going to do this? I wasn’t questioning it, but
by golly, it amazed me. After I was only centimeters away from her face, she
turned away. Almost telepathically I knew what was wrong. She just couldn’t do
this. The last thing she did can’t be whoring herself off to me, no matter how
I could justify it to myself. I motioned for her to lie down on the bed, and
she did. She went and faced me on the far side of her twin bed. Well, needless
to say, it was small. She motioned for me to lie down next to her. I promptly
obliged, and nestled as close as I could without it being too weird. I adjusted
myself just inched away from her, hoping to feel close to her before I died.
But to my surprise, she leaned in the next few inches. I could feel her chest
move up and down on my back. I could feel the sweet, warm breath of hers on my
neck. It felt good to finally be in the right bed, in the right house. I soon
fell asleep. I woke up to the sun rising. I
glanced at the clock. It read five thirty. The meteor would hit any second. I
could still feel her breathe on me, her chest moving, and I smiled. Why had she
done this? And then I realized. She had been just as lonely as me. She just
didn’t do anything about it. She just wanted to do one more good deed before
she died, and that happened to be to make me feel better. At least this one
day, this one morning, there were two less lonely people in the world, and one
of them, was me. © 2010 Charlie Duhad |
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